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Re: Confession
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Originally Posted by Rasta Marley
Also, there is too much to read with the lumping of words continuously; paragraphing with spaces between paragraphs would help, otherwise the reader would lose track....and interest.
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Yes, some paragraphing will certainly help
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Stabil0 is flat-chested like airport
Stabil0 is petite
Stabil0 is short
Stabil0 is skinny
Stabil0 is hated by all bcos she plays politics in office
Stabil0 tried to seduce Boss's son but not successful
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